Feedback on our 25 word pitch

We read out our 25 word pitch to our classmates to give us the opportunity to get feedback from them. Above is a picture of the feedback we received. One question asked was 'what genre is it?'. In answer to this we have decided the genre of our film is dance/drama.
Overall we were happy with the feedback we received with people stating that they thought our pitch made our film sound interesting and intriguing.